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FemCare SheGold™ for WomenFemCare SheGold by Herbal Maza Luxury Shilajit Resin for Women's Hormonal Balance, Natural Glow, Strength & Feminine Vitality Himalayan Shilajit, Kesar & Swarna Bhasma FemCare SheGold is a luxury Ayurvedic Shilajit resin formulated specifically for women developed under the expert guidance of Dr. Yunus Malik, one of India's most trusted names in Unani and herbal wellness. Going far beyond ordinary Shilajit supplements, SheGold combines four premium

FemCare SheGold™ by Herbal Maza – Luxury Shilajit Resin for Women's Hormonal Balance, Natural Glow, Strength & Feminine Vitality | Himalayan Shilajit, Kesar & Swarna Bhasma

FemCare SheGold™ is a luxury Ayurvedic Shilajit resin formulated specifically for women — developed under the expert guidance of Dr. Yunus Malik, one of India's most trusted names in Unani and herbal wellness. Going far beyond ordinary Shilajit supplements, SheGold™ combines four premium ingredients — Himalayan Shilajit Resin, Kesar (Saffron), Pure Gold (Swarna Bhasma), and a proprietary blend of powerful Ayurvedic herbs including Ashwagandha, Safed Musli, Shatavari-type herbs, and Triphala — into a concentrated, high-potency resin that works at the deepest level of feminine wellness.

FemCare SheGold™ is designed for modern women who want deeper, long-term results — not quick fixes. It works from within to restore hormonal balance, improve physical energy and stamina, enhance skin radiance and natural glow, support emotional stability and mood, and promote the holistic feminine vitality that allows a woman to feel strong, beautiful, and confident in every dimension of her life. The concentrated resin format ensures significantly higher potency and better absorption compared to gummies, sticks, or capsule formats — delivering every active compound at its full natural strength.


Important Guidance for Women with Health Conditions

Pregnant or Breastfeeding Women — Do Not Use: FemCare SheGold™ contains Shilajit, adaptogenic herbs, and Swarna Bhasma (processed gold). These ingredients are not recommended during pregnancy or breastfeeding. Pregnant or lactating women must not use this product.

Women with Hormonal Conditions, PCOS, or Endometriosis: Physician consultation is required before starting, as certain Ayurvedic herbs including Ashwagandha and Safed Musli may influence hormonal levels and require monitoring in women with pre-existing hormonal diagnoses.

Women with Diabetes: Shilajit and Ashwagandha may have mild blood sugar-influencing activity. Diabetic women on medication should consult their physician before starting and monitor blood glucose during initial use.

Women on Prescription Medications: Consult a qualified healthcare professional before starting, particularly if taking hormonal medications, thyroid medications, or immunosuppressants.


What Is FemCare SheGold™?

FemCare SheGold™ is an Ayurvedic proprietary formulation in the classical resin format — the most concentrated and bioavailable delivery method for Shilajit and herbal compounds. Unlike Shilajit sticks, gummies, or capsules which contain diluted or processed forms of the active compounds, SheGold™ is a pure resin preparation that delivers Shilajit's fulvic acid, trace minerals, and synergistic herbal actives at their full natural potency in every dose.

The formulation is built around four core ingredient categories — Himalayan Shilajit Resin as the foundational adaptogen, Kesar (Saffron) for mood and radiance, Pure Gold in its classical Ayurvedic Swarna Bhasma form for deep rejuvenation and vitality, and a proprietary Ayurvedic herbal blend for hormonal balance, energy, digestive wellness, and overall feminine health. Together, they create a complete, multi-dimensional female wellness supplement unlike anything available in ordinary Shilajit products.


Which Concerns Does FemCare SheGold™ Help With?

  • Hormonal Imbalance: Fluctuating oestrogen, progesterone, and cortisol levels causing irregular cycles, mood swings, fatigue, and physical symptoms.
  • Chronic Fatigue & Low Physical Energy: Persistent tiredness and lack of vitality from demanding daily schedules, stress, poor sleep, or nutritional gaps.
  • Dull Skin & Loss of Natural Radiance: Stress, hormonal fluctuation, and nutritional deficiency dimming skin glow, texture, and natural luminosity.
  • Hair Weakness & Loss of Hair Vitality: Hormonal imbalance and micronutrient deficiency contributing to reduced hair strength, lustre, and growth.
  • Mood Fluctuations & Emotional Instability: Stress-driven mood swings, anxiety, irritability, and emotional fatigue reducing wellbeing and daily quality of life.
  • Low Stamina & Physical Weakness: Reduced physical endurance and muscle strength affecting daily productivity, exercise capacity, and overall vitality.
  • Mental Fatigue & Brain Fog: Cognitive tiredness, difficulty concentrating, and reduced mental clarity from chronic stress or hormonal disruption.
  • Low Confidence & Diminished Feminine Vitality: A general sense of reduced energy, attractiveness, and personal power linked to hormonal or nutritional decline.
  • Intimate Wellness Concerns: Low libido, reduced intimate energy, or diminished connection with personal femininity linked to hormonal imbalance or chronic fatigue.
  • General Female Wellness Decline: An overall need for comprehensive, deep-acting natural support to restore feminine strength, beauty, and wellbeing simultaneously.

Key Ingredients & Their Benefits

Himalayan Shilajit Resin (Asphaltum punjabianum)

The foundational ingredient of SheGold™ — and the most revered natural substance in Ayurvedic medicine for both men and women. Sourced from Himalayan rock formations, Shilajit Resin is uniquely rich in fulvic acid and over 80 naturally occurring trace minerals. In women, Shilajit supports cellular energy production (ATP), combats chronic physical and mental fatigue, supports hormonal balance, improves bone density, nourishes skin and hair at the cellular level, and acts as a powerful adaptogen — helping the female body manage and recover from the demands of stress, exertion, and hormonal fluctuation. The resin format ensures the highest possible concentration and bioavailability of these active compounds.

Kesar (Crocus sativus – Saffron)

The world's most precious spice — and one of the most extensively studied natural ingredients for women's emotional and physical wellness. Saffron contains crocin and safranal — bioactive compounds with well-documented effects on mood elevation, stress reduction, and cognitive clarity. For women, saffron is particularly valued for its effects on hormonal mood balance — helping manage PMS-related mood fluctuations, reducing anxiety, promoting emotional calm, and supporting the natural skin radiance and luminosity that stress and hormonal disruption commonly diminish. Its antioxidant compounds also protect skin cells from oxidative aging.

Swarna Bhasma (Pure Gold – Processed Ayurvedic Gold)

One of Ayurveda's most precious and revered rejuvenating ingredients. Swarna Bhasma is Pure Gold processed through the traditional Ayurvedic Bhasma method — a rigorous purification and calcination process that converts gold into a bioavailable form for internal use. In classical Ayurvedic medicine, Swarna Bhasma is considered a supreme Rasayana — a deep rejuvenating compound that enhances vitality, strengthens immunity, supports nervous system health, promotes longevity, and imparts a natural luminosity and glow to the skin. It is the ingredient that elevates SheGold™ above all other Shilajit products for women.

Ashwagandha (Withania somnifera)

One of Ayurveda's most powerful adaptogens — with extensive evidence in both men and women. In women, Ashwagandha reduces cortisol levels, combats stress-induced fatigue, supports thyroid function, improves hormonal balance, increases physical stamina and endurance, and significantly improves sleep quality. It is particularly effective for women experiencing stress-driven hormonal disruption, adrenal fatigue, or anxiety-linked wellness decline.

Safed Musli (Chlorophytum borivilianum)

Known in Ayurveda as "White Gold" — a powerful tonic for female reproductive health, physical vitality, and hormonal wellness. Safed Musli supports female hormonal balance, improves energy and stamina, nourishes the reproductive system, and supports the physical strength and vitality that defines feminine wellness. Its saponin content provides anti-inflammatory and adaptogenic benefits that support overall female health.

Shatavari-Type Herbs (Asparagus racemosus)

The premier female tonic herb in Ayurvedic medicine. Shatavari-type herbs nourish the female reproductive system, support oestrogen balance, reduce PMS and menopausal symptoms, improve libido and intimate wellness, enhance physical stamina, and promote the kind of deep feminine vitality that goes far beyond surface-level wellbeing. Shatavari is considered the most important single herb for comprehensive female hormonal and reproductive health.

Triphala (Three-Fruit Blend)

A classical Ayurvedic three-fruit combination — Amalaki (Emblica officinalis), Bibhitaki (Terminalia bellirica), and Haritaki (Terminalia chebula) — that is one of the most important digestive and antioxidant formulas in Ayurveda. Triphala supports digestive health for optimal nutrient absorption, provides potent antioxidant protection for skin and cellular health, supports gentle detoxification, and enhances the bioavailability of all other active ingredients in the SheGold™ formula.


How Does FemCare SheGold™ Work?

  • Hormonal Balance Restoration: Ashwagandha, Shatavari-type herbs, and Safed Musli work together to support healthy oestrogen, progesterone, and cortisol regulation — addressing the root causes of hormonal imbalance that affect mood, energy, skin, hair, and intimate wellness.
  • Cellular Energy & Fatigue Combat: Shilajit's fulvic acid complex enhances ATP production in cells — restoring physical energy at the mitochondrial level, combating fatigue, and improving stamina and daily vitality for women.
  • Skin Radiance & Glow Enhancement: Kesar's crocin antioxidants, Swarna Bhasma's classical glow-imparting properties, and Triphala's cellular antioxidant protection work together to enhance skin luminosity, reduce oxidative skin aging, and promote a natural radiance from within.
  • Mood Elevation & Emotional Stability: Saffron's safranal and crocin support serotonin activity — reducing stress, improving mood, and promoting the emotional balance that underlies confidence, wellbeing, and quality of life for women.
  • Deep Rejuvenation (Swarna Bhasma): Swarna Bhasma's classical Rasayana action works at the deepest level of cellular and nervous system health — strengthening immunity, nourishing neural tissue, and promoting the holistic vitality and luminosity that is the hallmark of Ayurvedic gold preparations.
  • Absorption Optimisation (Triphala): Triphala supports gut health and nutrient absorption — ensuring that every active ingredient in SheGold™ is fully absorbed and utilised for maximum benefit.

Key Benefits of FemCare SheGold™

  • Supports hormonal balance and feminine health through the most comprehensive Ayurvedic female wellness formula in the Herbal Maza range.
  • Enhances natural skin glow and radiance through saffron, Swarna Bhasma, and Triphala antioxidant action.
  • Improves physical strength, stamina, and daily energy through Shilajit's cellular ATP enhancement.
  • Reduces stress, mental fatigue, and anxiety through Ashwagandha and saffron's powerful adaptogenic and mood-supporting properties.
  • Supports mood balance and emotional wellbeing — reducing hormonal mood swings and promoting calm, stable confidence.
  • Promotes healthy hair strength and vitality through mineral nourishment from Shilajit and Safed Musli.
  • Supports intimate wellness and feminine libido through Shatavari-type herbs and hormonal balance support.
  • Provides deep cellular rejuvenation through Swarna Bhasma — an ingredient found in no other product in the Herbal Maza range.
  • High-potency resin format — more concentrated and bioavailable than gummies, sticks, or capsule Shilajit products.
  • Premium natural ingredients — no harmful chemicals, no synthetic hormones, no artificial boosters.

What Makes FemCare SheGold™ Different?

  • The only Herbal Maza product specifically formulated exclusively for women's wellness — not a male wellness product repurposed for women.
  • Contains Swarna Bhasma (Ayurvedic Pure Gold) — a premium rejuvenating Rasayana ingredient found in no other product in the Herbal Maza range.
  • High-potency Shilajit resin format — significantly more concentrated and bioavailable than sticks, gummies, or capsule forms.
  • Seven-ingredient synergy — Shilajit, Saffron, Swarna Bhasma, Ashwagandha, Safed Musli, Shatavari-type herbs, and Triphala — covering hormonal, cellular, mood, skin, hair, and digestive wellness simultaneously.
  • Formulated by Dr. Yunus Malik — a trusted name with 15+ years of expertise in Unani and Ayurvedic wellness for men and women.
  • Luxury premium positioning — premium-grade natural ingredients in luxury packaging with discreet delivery.
  • This is not just Shilajit. It is a complete feminine wellness ritual built around the world's most precious natural and Ayurvedic ingredients.

Who Should Use FemCare SheGold™?

  • Women experiencing hormonal imbalance — irregular cycles, mood swings, fatigue, or PMS — seeking a comprehensive natural solution.
  • Women with chronic low energy, stress-related fatigue, or adrenal exhaustion.
  • Women seeking natural skin glow, radiance enhancement, and anti-aging cellular protection.
  • Women experiencing hair weakness, reduced hair vitality, or hair loss linked to hormonal or nutritional causes.
  • Women with mood fluctuations, anxiety, or emotional instability seeking natural mood balance support.
  • Women wanting to improve intimate wellness, libido, and feminine vitality naturally.
  • Women who want a luxury, high-potency Ayurvedic wellness ritual rather than a basic supplement.
  • Women approaching or experiencing perimenopause or menopause seeking natural hormonal transition support.
  • Women aged 20 and above who want comprehensive, long-term feminine wellness support in a single premium daily formulation.

Who Should Avoid FemCare SheGold™?

  • Girls and women under 18 years of age.
  • Pregnant women — Shilajit, Swarna Bhasma, and adaptogenic herbs are not recommended during pregnancy. Do not use.
  • Breastfeeding women — consult a physician before use.
  • Women with diagnosed hormonal conditions (PCOS, endometriosis, thyroid disorders) — physician consultation required before starting.
  • Women on prescription hormonal medications, thyroid medications, or immunosuppressants — consult your physician before use.
  • Women with known allergies to any of the listed Ayurvedic ingredients.
  • Women with serious chronic conditions — consult a qualified healthcare professional before starting.

How to Use FemCare SheGold™

  • Daily Dose: Take a pea-sized amount of SheGold™ resin (approximately 300mg to 500mg) once daily.
  • With Warm Milk: Dissolve the resin in a small glass of warm milk (dairy or plant-based) for best absorption. The fat content of milk significantly enhances the bioavailability of fat-soluble actives including Shilajit's fulvic acid and Swarna Bhasma.
  • Best Time: Take in the morning on an empty stomach or 30 minutes before breakfast for optimal absorption and hormonal support throughout the day.
  • Alternative: Can be dissolved in warm water or warm herbal tea if preferred.
  • Consistency: For meaningful hormonal, energy, and skin results, use consistently every day. Benefits build cumulatively — do not expect overnight results from a deep-acting Rasayana formulation.
  • Recommended Course Duration: A minimum of 2 to 3 months for comprehensive hormonal balance and skin improvement. For deep rejuvenation benefits from Swarna Bhasma, extended use of 3 to 6 months produces the most profound and lasting results.
  • Storage: Store in a cool, dry place away from direct sunlight and moisture. Keep the lid tightly sealed. Keep out of reach of children.

Expected Results Timeline

  • Week 1–2: Improved daily energy, reduced mental fatigue, and a subtle lift in mood as Shilajit and saffron begin their cellular and neurochemical action.
  • Weeks 3–4: Noticeable improvements in skin brightness and natural radiance. Better mood stability, reduced stress response, and improved physical stamina becoming part of the daily experience.
  • Months 2–3: Meaningful improvements in hormonal balance — more regular cycles, reduced PMS symptoms, better emotional stability, and sustained physical vitality. Skin glow and hair health reach their initial peak improvement.
  • Months 3–6: Deep rejuvenation benefits of Swarna Bhasma and the full Rasayana action of the formula become most evident — a comprehensive sense of restored feminine vitality, confidence, luminosity, and holistic wellbeing.

Safety & Quality Assurance

  • Ayurvedic Proprietary Formulation: Developed under the expert guidance of Dr. Yunus Malik following classical Ayurvedic formulation principles.
  • Premium-Grade Natural Ingredients: Himalayan Shilajit Resin, Kesar, Swarna Bhasma, and a full proprietary Ayurvedic herbal blend — all sourced and processed to premium quality standards.
  • No Harmful Chemicals or Synthetic Hormones: Free from artificial additives, synthetic oestrogen, pharmaceutical stimulants, and harmful fillers.
  • Manufactured in India: Produced under Herbal Maza quality standards in India.
  • Luxury Packaging: SheGold™ is presented in premium packaging that reflects the luxury positioning of the formulation.
  • Discreet Delivery: All orders dispatched in completely plain, unmarked packaging. Your privacy is fully protected on every order.

Disclaimer

FemCare SheGold™ by Herbal Maza is an Ayurvedic proprietary wellness supplement and is not intended to diagnose, treat, cure, or prevent any disease or medical condition. The information provided on this page is for educational and wellness purposes only and does not constitute medical advice. Results may vary between individuals depending on age, health status, lifestyle, diet, and consistency of use. Pregnant women must not use this product. Breastfeeding women, women with diagnosed hormonal conditions, and women on prescription medications should consult a qualified healthcare professional before use. Women under 18 years of age should not use this product. This product is not a substitute for professional medical or hormonal treatment. Keep out of reach of children.

To order FemCare SheGold™ or to speak directly with Dr. Yunus Malik about the right Herbal Maza wellness product for your specific needs, contact us on WhatsApp at +91 87550 78856 or visit www.herbalmaza.com. Your strength, your glow, your vitality — restored from within.

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R Spires
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★★★★★ 4
High on Tropes and Satisfaction
Format: Kindle
This is a great Romantasy book full of action, adventure, and everything you look for in this genre. I won’t lie: it does kinda feel like the author found every common trope from every successful book of this kind and threw them all into this novel. But if it ain’t broke, don’t fix it. Especially in romance, there’s a large audience who has specific expectations, and they want them every time. Nothing wrong with that and many times I’m one of them. I have no idea what defines a spoiler honestly, so spoiler alert!!!!!!! Tropes include: Only one bed at the inn/bar Dissatisfaction with life before hunk appears Lost royalty The chosen one Montage of dress up time followed by shocked hunk Forbidden romance between two from rival peoples Power that cannot be controlled, simply guided/asked Gathering intel at the inn/bar FMC who knows how to fight/use weapons well There’s probably more but no need to list them all. Good story and I would recommend!
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evelynn kate
Waukegan, US
★★★★★ 5
AMAZING debut novel!!!
Format: Kindle
Plot ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ Spice 🌶️🌶️.5 Romance 💘💘💘 Vibes ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ Dual 1st person POV - Ara (26) & Rogue (39 - but looks mid-20s: they can live hundreds of years so this isn't that large of a gap as it could've been which I heavily appreciate lol) Tropes: enemies to lovers, fae/human wars (deep hatred for each other), shifters (dragons- MMC can only partial shift with wings), one horse, one bed, touch her and d!e, found family, abduction turned to freedom The Last Storm is the debut novel from JD Linton and let me tell you, you guys NEED to read this. The plot was engaging and the editing was was amazing (especially for a debut novel). Our FMC, Ara, is stuck in her gilded cage longing for a life outside of her small town. She uses her books to escape and live vicariously through the pages (honestly, relatable). After her father announces her betrothal to her childhood friend (to whom she has no romantic feelings for), Ara tumbles unknowingly into a desperate plot trying to stop the humans from slaughtering the Fae. As one can expect from an enemies to lovers / kidnapper/captive romance, Ara fights her attraction and lust towards our MMC, Rogue (the King of the Fae), for as long as she can. Upon seeing Ara for the first time, Rogue is instantly aware that she is his fated mate (not a spoiler). Since she is the General's only daughter, he plans to abduct her and use her as leverage to stop the brutality. During Ara's time in Rogue's captivity, their banter and chemistry continue to rise until they finally boil over and come together (quite literally, and many times I may add 😉). Here's what I LOVED: - Rogue continuously seeks advice from his elders and deeply respects their opinions and life experience and tries to implement their recommendations - Rogue makes many mistakes in the beginning but we see him actively work on not repeating them as the book progresses. The level of self-awareness and his ability to change his behavior was impressive - The magic system is intricate and we have only scraped the surface. As the series continues and Ara progresses in her powers, I'm sure we'll get to see more of this. I absolutely LOVE the messaging system that is used in this book. - Ara's struggles are so human and so raw. She is experiencing so much guilt and pain and hurt and getting to see her work through each of these emotions is inspiring. Especially as her and Rogue get closer and she learns she can lean on him as well, that she is not alone. - While this is the start of a series, there is NO cliffhanger! There's a bit of a teaser of something major that is going to happen at the start of the next book, but it's not a cliffhanger in the sense that we aren't sure if someone is going to live or d!e or if they'll be separated. For that, I am very thankful! This book was so much fun that I will definitely be returning to book 2, even if it takes several months (or longer since this is an debut author) to publish! - Lastly, the cover is GORGEOUS! And I love the title! I'll copy a few of my favorite quotes below so you can have a little taste of the author's writing and the world she's cultivated. 😊 Top Highlights from The Last Storm On days like this, when my heart was heavy and my mind clouded, I resorted to books— to escape, to forget, to find freedom where I had none. If I were to marry him, my face would always be turned to the window, searching for more, and if not that, I would be a shell of the person I am now. I stepped back to admire her, thr0bbing at the sight. She was the most beautiful woman I had ever seen. To ever exist. Nothing, no one, had ever deserved to be worshiped more. All men should be made to kneel before her. But she would have to settle for me. The taste of her met my t0ngue as my scent merged with hers, forever branding her. Mine. I l!cked the wound. Hers. Completely and utterly hers. I didn’t claim her in ownership. I claimed her as my one. Devoted myself to one. With that mark, my body and soul were bound to her. I would never be with anyone else, emotionally or physically. It would be her or no one, until my last breath. “Scream my name. Let everyone know who I belong to.” I had never really cared about the weather before, but now, clear skies meant everything to me, and I was grateful to see another calm morning. “There will never be another woman for me.” He paused. “Ever.” I stilled at his words. “What… Why?” “This”— his thumb slid down across the mark—“ is a symbol of… surrender. I know you believe that it was my claim upon you, but it wasn’t. It never was. I bound my body and soul to you, little storm.” “I also know that it is more than this tiny, insignificant mark on your skin that binds me to you. It’s you. All of you. Your strength and resilience. Your determination to endure no matter what fate throws at you. Your love for love and stories and hope. You are entirely the opposite of everything that I am and I would gladly wear your shackles if it meant I could have you.” My mate. Mine. And then everything shifted and I understood. I understood everything. The surrender. The deep, soul-craving longing. Bound. I was bound to him. Body and soul. Entirely his. “I would’ve waited forever,” he whispered back, understanding. Seriously, everyone.. add this to your TBR!!
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Ashlee
Alexandria, US
★★★★★ 4
A Decent Fae Romance
Format: Kindle
** 3.5 Stars rounded up to 4 ** First off I want to say that I found the author, J. D. Linton, on TikTok right before the release of the sequel. I bought the first 2 books to support her release, so congrats to her for the release of the sequel! Overall, I liked the story & plot, I liked the characters, and I liked the spice. The downfalls: not enough development between the characters for the romance, and it leaned a little heavy into the tropes. A lot of stuff is told to you, which could have been used as devices to drive the plot and emotions of the characters. 🛑🛑 Mild Spoilers ahead, I tried to hide the obvious ones 🛑🛑 This is very obviously a fated mates, which is a trope I usually really enjoy. But I wish the relationship between Ara & Rogue had much more development before it's realized that they're mates, instead of Rogue knowing almost immediately and using it for nefarious purposes (at least in the beginning before they get to know each other). By revealing this within the first quarter of the book, I feel like it leaves less room for them to fall for each other organically (albeit with help from the mating bond) and they love each other because of the mating bond. I was disappointed as soon as Rogue know (literally only 5% in) and I literally made a note: "As much as II love a good mating trope, I wish we had to work for it a little more. Where's the fun in just telling us?" I believe that by holding out and feeding the reader snippets of a potential bond, it would've been more rewarding as a reader. I also wish there was more world building - we are told of a war between human & fae but don't get to really experience any of it. Ara is sheltered in her human home, then sheltered in Rogue's castle. There's bits and pieces about what the war has done on either side - but we're more told of the aftermath and don't really experience any of it. Ara's father is supposed to be the king's #1 general - yet he is at home with his family & with Ara for the first couple chapters. Her, her family, nor her village seem to be affected by the 10 year war going on on their borders. I wish there was a little more setup to make this conflict - an actual war - feel more than a skirmish between fighting territories. Linton could also be a little repetitive - with the biggest culprit being when Ara is upset she "brings [her] knees to [her] chest]" and either sits like that or cries. Every time she is upset this phrase is mentioned. I would get it if this was her crutch, or how she copes with grief and stress, but that should be explained why she does it so often or it becomes repetitive. I started to get annoyed with how often she would sit like this solely because it happens every couple chapters. However, I did really like the spice. I love an enemies to lovers trope, especially when it results in spicy scenes. The spicy scenes weren't anything new, but they were fun. Wish there were more but that could also just be me - there is no such thing as too much spice 😂 Would I read again? Probably not, I'm super picky with rereads. Although I did genuinely enjoy my first read through! Will I continue the series? Probably, at least for the sequel. As for #3, kind of depends on where I am with my TBR once that is released All in all an enjoyable, fast paced read
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Ashton Taylor
Whiting, US
★★★★★ 3
I love indie authors
Format: Kindle
Let me preface this by saying—writing a book is HARD! Coming up with characters so real that they take on a life of their own, building an entire world, the political/magic system. Designing all of this is no easy feat. That being said. This book had so. Much. Potential. I was so excited to read this book, and I plan to finish it for the sake of finishing it. But. At this point, I would have set I’d aside as a DNF. The book could have benefited from some form of a developmental editor, or an in depth beta reader. I will say this. Within 5 chapters, there are so many… phrases that I’ve highlight that I’ve latched onto. Phrases about books and storms that were written BEAUTIFULLY! So, bravo Linton for hitting the nail on the head as to why readers disappear like they do! However, 5 chapters in and I can already guess where a majority of the story is going. But that’s also because I read like a mad-woman and have read this particular type of story, many different ways. Enemies to lovers where the FMC isn’t who she thinks she is. I am all about supporting indie authors. BUT. I also feel like criticism should be constructive, and not degrading. So if I could give this book a 4 1/2, strictly because I know the work the author put into this, I would. So if you’re looking for an easy read with characters that aren’t hard to follow, look no further! They are easy to love and easy to care for. One of the biggest issues they lacked, to me, was depth and plausible reactions to their situations. JD, you have done BEAUTIFULLY writing this book. I applaud and will continue to buy your books in the future. My BIGGEST recommendation is to definitely hire some form of an editor for any upcoming books. Or in turn, I will be happy to beta read for you. Should my opinion change of the book by the time I finish, I will happily get on here and say I was wrong, delete this review and post a different one. Until then…
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Reviewed in the United States on November 20, 2022
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Hannah Durham
Battle Creek, US
★★★★★ 5
this book set my soul ablaze! <3
Format: Paperback, Format: Paperback
"i had never really cared about the weather before, but now, clear skies meant everything to me, and i was grateful to see another calm morning." this book. this book! i loved the last storm so much. the writing style. the descriptions. the world-building. the characters. the plot twists. the tropes. the sexual tension. the—everything. everything was magic. the last storm follows our two main characters, ara and rogue, giving us dual POV from both characters (which i loved, btw). ara, a human girl who has been locked away in her father’s estate most of her life, just wants to see the world. all she dreams of is seeing what else is out there. but when her father announces her engagement, she knows that dream will become nothing more than just that—a dream. rogue, the fae king, is tired of the attacks being rained down on his people. in hopes of finding out the human king adon’s secrets, rogue infiltrates auryna’s borders. in his last resort to gain information, he visits the local pub. to his surprise, the general’s precious only child is sitting at the bar, drink round after round of mead. now he just needs to figure out how to take her without anyone noticing. first and foremost, let’s talk about the endless list of my favorite tropes and aspects that this book had. ›› enemies to lovers ›› fated mates ›› one bed ›› the chosen one ›› elemental magic ›› actually good and shocking plot twists!!! ›› badass female lead ›› morally-grey love interest ›› fae/human war ›› force proximity ›› touch her and die ›› who did this to you? ›› captor/captive ›› praise k!nk (panting profusely) “you are entirely the opposite of everything that i am, and i would gladly wear your shackles if it meant i could have you.” it’s been a long while since i read a book i liked this much. but i just loved this book. it set my soul ablaze. thank you to the author for writing this beautiful story and for blessing me with an eARC! i loved it so much that i immediately bought the paperback upon release! every aspect of this book was just beautiful. i was blown away by the way the world was described, the way feelings were portrayed, the way the elements were used in the fae’s magic. it just—AHHH! i just absolutely adored it all. i cannot wait for the second book to release next year! also the way he calls her “little storm” sets my heart on fire. this was a fast-paced read and if you are a lover of acotar, fbaa, deal with the elf king, or any other similar books, then please stop everything you’re doing and read this book right now. you won’t regret it. thank you again, jd linton, for giving me the privilege of reading your arc and for blessing this world with the world you created. <3 "something about him pulled me in, like a moth to a flame, and it felt as if i was just waiting for the inevitable burn that came with flying too close to the fire."
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Reviewed in the United States on November 15, 2022

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